We were learning about change and what it means to us
I really enjoyed rereading my poem in a poetry voice.
I found it hard to think of all my ideas of what change means it took me a long time but I finally got to it
I found the easy to find the last word at the bottom in capitals of what change means to you.
Wext time I need to improve my writing by adding more detail and use some better words in my writing.
Hi Harry
ReplyDeleteMy name is Piper and I go to Mangapapa school I really liked your background and how you made a nice gradient with blue and pink. I think that next time you could maybe have some nicer ways to represent change, you could take out living to dying. Overall I really liked your post so have a great day.